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PostSubject: "It's About Time In September" By Nintenbrony   Sat Apr 07, 2012 10:06 pm

Okay everypony, this is my first fan ficiton I ever made. There was this contest to base a fan fiction off of "September" by TheLivingTombstone.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OSZlAltkYoc

The contest had two categories: Normal fan fiction and grimdark fan fiction. I had good ideas for a story, but I didn't know how to do it without going grimdark! So, I decided to go for the grimdark part. I want to know what everypony thinks about it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K6mKdETbAdl6sGJdPaJ_hCehM0rTjB0IVsUBx1oJ4bI/edit

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PostSubject: Re: "It's About Time In September" By Nintenbrony   Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:24 pm

It was well made and i love it. References to the series but making it your own was a good touch, but i raise the question how did twilight warn herself if she was dead? I don't know maybe I'm over analyzing this. Altogether a great short story.
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PostSubject: Re: "It's About Time In September" By Nintenbrony   Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:49 pm

Gasp! A contradiction! I never thought of that! and I thought I covered every flaw! Laughing

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PostSubject: Re: "It's About Time In September" By Nintenbrony   Mon Apr 09, 2012 6:32 pm

lol i not a grammatical reader but i read purely for story and understanding
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PostSubject: Re: "It's About Time In September" By Nintenbrony   Mon Apr 16, 2012 12:41 pm

Okay, I've onced over it! Go ahead and check out the corrections I've made.
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PostSubject: Re: "It's About Time In September" By Nintenbrony   Sat Jul 07, 2012 6:20 pm

I posted it to FIM Fiction, and it is a hit! There are still a few punctuation problems here-and-there, but hey, Cupcakes had a TON compared to this!

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/36744/It%27s-About-Time-In-September

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