New Comers by benrowe/ Doc pony stine (my Google name)

well this is a work in progress I will release the story to you guys first for feed back I hope you enjoy it i'll post chapters on this tread and if any one wants to become an editor (I'm dyslexic so you'll have your work cut out for you) contact me (you also need a Google account to edit and read my story. Well see you next update.

go to my next post for prologue

change the settings so that people can leave comments
it would make locating errors easier

done with the comment change

Well the prologue is now in second draft stage in which I take extra grammatical problems and story suggestions.

prologue has been joined with chapter one

I need a main editor who i give edit privilege to fix MINOR mistakes. That makes it easier for me and for the editor so he doesn't always have to comment. Pleas say some thing if you wish to help.

A made a few pages (am I going overbord with this) a Tumbler and a Face book in that order.
http://ask-aren-martin.tumblr.com/
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Doc-pony-stine/321719334573183

Okay guy's I'm actually back on this. I'm about ready to post the prologue on Fimfiction, but I would love cover art. If someone would volunteer that would be great. (I'll tell you what I would like)

So here is the basic look of my main character.


Get ride of the cape. I don't need it. And he will never have it. His magic is crimsoned.
Something where he's in action would be wonderful. There are guns and he'd be fighting ponies with modern bullet proof Armour. Think they look like SWAT ponies, with out the shield. And thank you dusky for trying to do this

O.K. I finally posted my story on Fimfiction here's the link.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54421/Newcomers
If any of you guys take the time to read it I'll be very happy. Comments for improvement would be good. And a like SPECTACULAR.
A thumbs down would be
wait for it.....
THE WORST POSIBLE THING!!!