benrowe Forum Veteran
Posts : 363 Join date : 2012-03-04 Age : 25 Location : good old Maine
| Subject: Why do I think we should go to mars? Tue Apr 23, 2013 8:27 pm | |
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SakuraSensei Forum Veteran
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| Subject: Why I think people should go to mars Wed Apr 24, 2013 12:28 pm | |
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Nintenbrony Admin
Posts : 658 Join date : 2012-01-02 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Why do I think we should go to mars? Thu Apr 25, 2013 3:32 pm | |
| Did you turn this in yet? If this has to be MLA format, there are a few citation errors. The intro is kind of stale and too direct. It needs a hook. In academic writing (MLA, APA, MPA, ect.), it is a sin to write in first person. Your paper should be based on scholarly, professional, and scientific records. First person opinion wont help you at all because people would question the source and profession of the person writing the paper. I have to dig up my MLA project on bronies that I turned in to college as a research project to share here. Best part is it was accepted and got a 90%! | |
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benrowe Forum Veteran
Posts : 363 Join date : 2012-03-04 Age : 25 Location : good old Maine
| Subject: Re: Why do I think we should go to mars? Thu Apr 25, 2013 9:49 pm | |
| Thank you, and this s only a draft. | |
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SakuraSensei Forum Veteran
Posts : 539 Join date : 2013-03-03 Age : 23 Location : Brunei
| Subject: Benrowe Fri Apr 26, 2013 4:10 pm | |
| - benrowe wrote:
- Thank you, and this s only a draft.
Okay! | |
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