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PostSubject: Why do I think we should go to mars?   Tue Apr 23, 2013 8:27 pm

Keep in mind I wrote this in two days, and hasn't been edited yet, but this is a physics project I had to do,

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h8SExUBtv5jVJ2zxYO8bJPsfeeF-ugnbGbw3ABVV1Cw/edit
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PostSubject: Why I think people should go to mars   Wed Apr 24, 2013 12:28 pm

benrowe wrote:
Keep in mind I wrote this in two days, and hasn't been edited yet, but this is a physics project I had to do,

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h8SExUBtv5jVJ2zxYO8bJPsfeeF-ugnbGbw3ABVV1Cw/edit
Good luck on that then. -_-

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PostSubject: Re: Why do I think we should go to mars?   Thu Apr 25, 2013 3:32 pm

Did you turn this in yet? If this has to be MLA format, there are a few citation errors. The intro is kind of stale and too direct. It needs a hook.

In academic writing (MLA, APA, MPA, ect.), it is a sin to write in first person. Your paper should be based on scholarly, professional, and scientific records. First person opinion wont help you at all because people would question the source and profession of the person writing the paper.

I have to dig up my MLA project on bronies that I turned in to college as a research project to share here. Best part is it was accepted and got a 90%! Laughing

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PostSubject: Re: Why do I think we should go to mars?   Thu Apr 25, 2013 9:49 pm

Thank you, and this s only a draft.
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PostSubject: Benrowe   Fri Apr 26, 2013 4:10 pm

benrowe wrote:
Thank you, and this s only a draft.
Okay!

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